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Adams Realty's Argument

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Although it is understandable that the author votes Adams Realty as a more superior real estate agent than the Fitch Realty based on his personal experience, it is necessary that a more logically convincing argument be fashioned before this conclusion is ratified and shared in public. There are several fragile parts in the argument on behalf of such a comparison. First of all, the argument insufficiently connects the Realtors' performance to their employees' work schedules. Second, the argument does not present enough logical data to justify its claims that Adam Realty performs stronger than Fitch Realty. Further, the data presented are quite vague, not providing enough information regarding the details of the supposedly higher achiever, Adams Realty, that sold properties faster than Fitch Reality. Finally, it is not guaranteed that the promoted realtor sells any home more quickly and at a better price compared to others especially Fitch Realty. While the author's hypothesis is certainly one possibility, more evidence is needed to eliminate other conclusions and to bolster the strength of this argument. …show more content…

No evidence is presented to establish this supposition. In order to strengthen this part of the argument, the author needs to provide more direct historical data and reasons of why people's working schedule directly influence the realtor's overall performance. For example, the percentage of how part time working schedules limit the Realtors' capability to show the properties can be added as a more convincing factor. It is imprudent to presume that staffers' working schedules directly increase or decrease their

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