TO: Denise Burgess, English 102 Professor
FROM: Jami Fryer, college student
DATE: February 14, 2008
SUBJECT: Comparison/Contrast Analysis
“Redefining Fitness for Health and Fitness Professionals” and “College Eating and Fitness 101: A Guide for College Students” are two articles that discuss fitness and nutrition. Their topic matter may be the same, but the way they approach their discussion and the information they include are quite different. “Redefining Fitness for Health and Fitness Professionals” is a scholarly article that uses an eloquent tone, researched statistics, and a complicated format. “College Eating and Fitness 101: A Guide for College Students” is a popular article that uses a creative, easy-to-read
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“Redefining Fitness for Health and Fitness Professionals” was published in Lorman, Mississippi in 2001 by Alcorn State University. The article was written by Ph.D A. Akande and his colleagues, C. Van Wyk, and J. Osagie. The twelve pages are filled with significant research and include more than twenty outside sources. “College Eating and Fitness 101: A Guide for College Students” was published in Boston in 2005 by The Center for Young Women’s Health. The article was written by the Children’s Hospital League. The attractive couple pages contain interesting facts and appealing graphics. Although both articles are written in concern with fitness, the context of the two varies in accordance with their targeted audiences.
Style of each article
The styles of the two articles follow suit with their appropriate audiences and therefore, have a difference in style. “Redefining Fitness for Health and Fitness Professionals” is set up in a more complex style. The language choice used is for people on a more professional level with higher education. The sentence structures are more complex and include a significant amount of detail. The writing is formal and uses eloquent speech. On the other hand, “College Eating and Fitness 101: A Guide for College Students” uses a straightforward style. The language choice is much more simplistic and can be easily understood.
Being overweight, eating poorly, and not exercising are becoming an epidemic in America, especially among college students. Most of the research on it states the same things, however the first research article I found speaks more to the behavior and its current affects on college students’ health. A slew of doctors and Jesse S. Morrell wrote an article about “Risk Factors Among College Men and Women” in relationship to obesity. The opening of this article stated that “an estimated 300,000 deaths each year are attributable to obesity… and young adults have experienced dramatic increases in obesity rates,” (Morrell, 2012, pg. 82). This statistic is what really got the research going and helped the researchers focus specifically on college-aged individuals. Upon diving into their research, the authors found more alarming statistics and related diseases. This included a recognizable relationship between obesity in young people and chronic disease risk, especially diabetes and cardiovascular disease (Morrell, 2012, pg. 82). In fact, CVD was the second leading cause of death in the US in that college-age group showing that our generation is at a greater risk for health problems than ever before due to our lack of exercise and healthy diets. Researchers then took to college campuses to examine students and their habits and provide risk assessments to promote healthier lifestyles and hopefully decrease the probability of CVD and DM through the metabolic syndrome system,
Main Points: Included in this speech will be a step by step guide on how to prioritize fitness among a world of other things in our lives that may seem vastly more important, on how to eat healthy even on a college kids budget, and how to take the work out of workout by making exercise more convenient and fun.
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