The Suspense in Short Stories
Every story needs suspense if you want to keep readers interested in your writing, and there are many ways you can add it to your story. A few instances of this are using irony to put the reader on the edge of their seat, clues that readers can pick up on and piece together, and imagery to shape images in readers. Three stories that are great examples of this are The Tell-Tale Heart, The Landlady, and The Red Room.
The main way Edgar Allan Poe makes suspense in the former, The Tell-Tale Heart, is by using irony. For example, it starts with the narrator professing to the audience that he is not insane: “But why do you say that I have lost control of my mind, why do you say that I am mad? Can you not see that I have full control of my mind” (Poe, 1). It is ironic because the narrator refuses to accept the fact that he is insane even though the readers know he is due to his strange and dangerous behaviors; this creates suspense by making the reader feel unsure of what to believe since this makes the narrator out to be unreliable, and makes them uneasy of what the narrator may do next as they keep spiraling down into their madness and paranoia. Another instance of irony in the story is when the narrator is discussing his murderous plan: “[The narrator is] as friendly to the old man as [he can] be, and warm, and loving” (Poe, 2). The irony is that the narrator is anything but this and is planning to murder the old man; deepening suspense by making
One feature that created suspense in the story was time. In the “Tell-Tale Heart”, time often seemed to speed up or slow down. One example of time movely slowly in the passage is: “I moved slowly-- very, very slowly, so I might not disturb the old man’s sleep”. You almost sense the deliberate movements of narrator. In contrast, the phrase: “The night waned, and I worked hastily, but in silence”, shows that time is advancing quickly; you could almost see the moon vanishing and the narrator’s quick movements. These “time warps” adds suspense, anticipation, and a growing sense of horror to the story and encourages the reader to continue reading.
Poe writes “The Tell Tale Heart” from the perspective of the murderer of the old man. When an author creates a situation where the central character tells his own account, the overall impact of the story is heightened. The narrator, in this story, adds to the overall effect of horror by continually stressing to the reader that he or she is not mad, and tries to convince us of that fact by how carefully this brutal crime was planned and executed. The point of view helps communicate that the theme is madness to the audience because from the beginning the narrator uses repetition, onomatopoeias, similes, hyperboles, metaphors and irony.
Edgar Allan Poe uses mood within “The Tell-Tale Heart” to show that death causes remorse and that the human heart can’t handle guilt. The mood within the story varies throughout the piece. The author has the mood start suspenseful by having the murderer peer towards the old man every night at
Have you ever felt like you were a part of the story? If you have that was most likely due too descriptive language. Edgar Allan Poe uses descriptive language in his stories and poems to build suspense and make you feel like you are a part of the story. In the Tell Tale Heart Poe describes the story with such graphic content that you can create a “movie” in your mind. In paragraph 3 of this story, Poe uses descriptive language when he writes “ I undid the lantern cautiously—oh, so cautiously—cautiously (for the hinges creaked)—I undid it just so much that a single thin ray fell upon the vulture eye. And this I did for seven long nights—”. You can literally see the narrator undoing the lantern and looking at the dreaded eye. This makes for a very suspenseful story considering you can see it, hear it, and sometimes even smell it. You feel like you are in the story and do not want anything bad to happen to you. Also in the Raven Poe uses very descriptive language to give you a mental movie and to build suspense. He does this when he writes “And the silken, sad, uncertain rustling of each purple curtain 14 Thrilled me — filled me with fantastic terrors never felt before; 15 So that now, to still the beating of my heart,”. When Poe writes this you can see the narrator going to answer the door and reassuring himself. This makes suspense considering you do not know what is at the
“The Tell-Tale Heart,” by Edgar Allan Poe, is a petrifying short story. Poe incorporated a variety of literary elements to intimidate the reader. Personification, theme, and symbols are combined to create a suspenseful horror story.
In “The Tell Tale Heart”, by Edgar Allen Poe, the reader is presented with the short story of a madman who narrates his murder of an old man because, “he had the eye of a vulture --a pale blue eye, with a film over it” (Poe 105). The narrator has thought thoroughly about his plan to murder this old man, and the murderer then stashes his body underneath the floorboards. Eventually, his guilt overcomes him and he starts hallucinating that he hears the old man’s heartbeat. Ultimately, he confesses to the police about his crime after being driven to the point of insanity due to his remorse. “The Tale Tell Heart” is one of Poe’s best-known stories because he utilizes the elements of Gothic Literature to establish a disturbing sense of mystery throughout the story. Farida characterizes Gothic Literature as “the elements of fear, horror, the supernatural and darkness” (Foster 1), and Poe effectively adopts this style in many of his short story. These ominous characteristics give the story both a dark and spontaneous sequence of events that draws the reader in. In “The Tell Tale Heart,” Edgar Allen Poe employs several Gothic elements such as the setting, emotion, and the word choice in order to communicate an uncertain description of reality. In any case, Poe 's technique definitely holds your attention coming into the story.
Have you ever read “The Tell Tale Heart” by Edgar Allan Poe? It is a short story about a man whose mental state deteriorates over time. The narrator loves the old man, however he has a deep hatred toward the old man’s vulture-like eye. This essay will be explaining the ways Poe keeps his readers in suspense. Edgar Allan Poe uses time, repetition, and descriptive language to set the pace, tone, and mood.
Poe was the first author to cater to the darker side of the mindscape. His works such as The Raven and The Pit and the Pendulum have been honored long after his mysterious death in Victorian England, although his writing weren’t widely recognized during his life. His works often deal with themes such as death and misery, and run on emotions regarding those. The work The Tell Tale Heart, is one of those, with the narrator’s insanity in overdrive as he murders an old man simply
People reads books and they get their captured by the suspense the authors use to write their stories. Suspense is a key point for most readers it keeps them reading the book to see what happens next. Both Edgar Allan Poe and Richard Connell are very good authors that use a lot of suspense throughout their short stories. Poe’s “Cask of Amontillado” and Connell’s “The Most Dangerous Game” are two stories full of suspense. It’s unpredictable, surprising that we can’t figure out what happens next. .Through conflict, setting, and diction Poe and Connell are able to build suspense.
For example, when Angela Wexler a perfect child who would not do anything harmful bombed her own face only to get caught by her mother, who cares so much about her. In the story it states that “ Angela glanced at her watch and reached for the tall, thin carton wrapped in gold foil.”this quote shows us that Angela knows when and where (it was in the parcel) the bomb in the Wexlers apartment will explode (Raskin 112). The reason why this part of the story shows suspense is because we don’t know the intentions of Angela, until the clues we find later in the story shows us Angela’s actual intention was to get caught by her mother and be an actual normal being. Another example of suspense is the cliffhangers. The reason why cliffhangers are suspenseful because they leave the reader dangling with questions, and want to read on to know more. A good example of a cliffhanger is after Turtle finds the answer to the game, we think Angela and Dr Deere are getting married, but it is actually Crow and Otis Amber’s wedding, which is very awkward moreover, we never knew what happened between them, like you don’t know what is happening when you are absent (Raskin 207). All of these are good examples of suspense which a good mystery novel
One of the literary devices used by Poe in The Tell Tale Heart is suspense. Hes uses suspense as a way to build up to the climax of the story, which is the death of the old man. Poe does this by using different tones throughout the story. One example of a suspenseful tone is this “You may think i became afraid. But no.”
Poe’s “Tell-Tale Heart” is a short story about a insane narrator which tries and eventually kills the old man, the narrator is his waiter, because of his vulture eye. In this story, readers feel curious and shock because of the dramatic and situational irony. First, Poe uses dramatic imagery to make the reader feel suspense. The mood is created when the narrator becomes determined to kill the old man because of his vulture eye, thus the reader knows the narrator wants to kill the old man, but the old man doesn’t know about it. ”I made up my mind to take the life of the old man” (Poe ) This make the reader feel suspense because it makes the reader like the old man’s hands are tied because he can’t overpower the narrator and he’s unaware of the narrator’s intention. Furthermore, Poe uses situational irony to create a mood of shock. The mood is created when the police officers knock on the old man’s door and come to investigate because of the narrators shriek, and the narrator started hearing the old man’s heartbeat, yet it grew louder and louder until he thought that the police officers are hearing the heartbeat and are mocking the narrator, so the narrator couldn’t take any more and admitted
Suspense is used to make the reader feel anxious or excited about what may happen later in the story. Diction is the choice of words and phrases in a writing to make it flow more fluently. An example of suspense used in Tell Tale Heart is, “Every night about twelve o’clock I slowly opened his door. And when the door was opened wide enough I put my hand in, and then my head. In my hand I held a light covered over with cloth so that no light showed. And I stood there quietly. Then, carefully, I lifted the cloth, just a little, so that a single, thin, small light fell across that eye. For seven nights I did this, seven long nights, every night at midnight. Always the eye was closed, so it was impossible for me to do the work. For it was not the old man I felt I had to kill; it was the eye, his Evil Eye.” (Poe, 64) This is an example of suspense because the narrator is stalking the old man and watching him sleep and it is making the reader feel anxious toward what will happen. “Never before had I felt so strongly my own power; I was now sure of success.” (Poe, 64) The quote shows diction with the phrase “sure of success” which rolls of the tongue smoothly. Therefore, Poe uses diction and suspense to help enhance the experience felt by the
One of the theme’s more prevalent themes that present it’s self in the Tell-Tale Heart the theme of is insane verses sane. This theme is one of the central themes in the story. You can see this in the first sentence of the story in which the person says “True!—nervous—very, very dreadfully nervous I had been and am but why will you say that I am mad” (Poe, 331). The more the man tries to convince the people he is retelling the story that he is sane the more it shows how very much insane he actually is. When he tells the story of the old man that he murdered he tells it calmly and remorseless. He states in his retelling that he did not hate the old man or that he wanted the old man’s wealth when he murdered him. He says the reason he murdered the old man is that his one eye which was pale with a film over it resembled an eye of a vulture. (Poe, 331) Then he says “Now this is the point. You fancy me mad. Madmen know nothing. But you
In “The Tell Tale Heart”, three characteristics of horror stand out: suspense, hubris, and an unreliable narrator. The first big element in the story is hubris. The narrator states, “But you should have seen me. You should have seen how wisely I proceeded --with what caution --with what foresight --with what dissimulation I went to work!” (Poe 89,90). The narrator was proud of how well he was able to commit the murder and hide it from the outside world. But then when the police came, he got extremely paranoid and started hearing the heartbeat of the man and somehow confessed the murder. "Villains!" I shrieked, "dissemble no more! I admit the deed! --tear up the planks! here, here! --It is the beating of his hideous heart!" (Poe 94). Another important element in this story is suspense. He said that he was going to kill the man, but he had to wait for the perfect moment to do so. He wanted to see the eye to get him mad so he could actually commit the murder but it took him eight suspenseful days to actually find the eye open. The whole