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Reflective Essay 'Show Don T Tell'

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At first, writing a memoir seemed daunting, I had never attempted to review and write about a snapshot of my life. As you began posing questions, “worst betrayal, greatest regret, family secret, closest call, deepest fear,” being crushed was up there, although there are worse things a person can through, but that’s another story. Reflecting on the process used to write my memoir was an enjoyable exercise, compelling me to contemplate the progression and detail of my thought process. During class memories came flooding back, and the more I focused on that day, the greater the clarity I had. Writing all the “show don’t tell” I found enjoyable and with an earthquake there are numerous sights to describe, with the details carefully filed away, …show more content…

Narration, story arc, creative descriptive verse, and tension, all the elements to retain my reader’s attention and tell my story were there, and although my second draft was crude, my memoir began to take shape. During the following class you suggested adding dialogue. At first I thought “she’s going to be disappointed” as I have no additional dialogue, but I concluded that a memoir is not always about dialogue, it’s about describing events, being creative, while fashioning a personal and true story that will intrigue and capture the imagination of the reader. The following morning, I awoke to over a foot of snow and a message from my employer stating that they decided to close for the day. Taking full advantage of my snow day I wrote, edited, revised, read for tense, passive voice, and first person narrative. Once I recognized (after a few choice words said aloud) that I was overworking my memoir, I stopped and decided to read it out loud to my wife. With pencil in hand, I made notations, edited for grammar and punctuation, all while I delivered my monologue. Through that exercise I discovered what worked, and after one final revision I had what I would consider a nearly completed

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