Get the reader’s attention. Set the scene. Who is involved? When and where did the event take place?
Parents Sara and Brian Fitzgerald have a daughter Kate who at the age of two was diagnosed with a rare and aggressive form of leukemia. Like most cancer patients Kate undergoes chemotherapy, however her oncologist feels Kate may need a bone marrow transplant in time. The doctor recommends the bone marrow come from a related donor. Unfortunately, their oldest son, Jesse is not a match, so their oncologist suggest an unborn child could be a match. Left with no other options Sara and Brian with the help of scientist conceive their youngest daughter, Anna which is a genetic match to her sister Kate.
Identify your thesis. What did you learn, or why is the event important?
Kate being diagnosed with leukemia starts
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Topic Sentence: How the story begins Detail 1: Kate is diagnosed with leukemia and needs a bone marrow transplant from a related donor. Detail 2: Anna is conceived with the help of scientist and is a genetic match to Kate. Detail 3: Anna has to involuntarily provide her sister with the necessary bone marrow or other organs she may need to survive. Body Paragraph 2: middle
Topic Sentence: The effects and emotional toll for the family as Kate fights her battle with cancer. The moral and ethical dilemma. Detail 1: The chemotherapy has made Kate extremely ill and is suffering from much pain. Detail 2: Anna wants more than anything to help her sister but at the same time wants to be a normal child. Detail 3: Kate’s illness has taken a toll on her family. Body Paragraph 3: end
Topic Sentence: Kate's final wish is not to be sick anymore or wait to die. The family says goodbye to Kate Detail 1:Kae no longer wants to undergo any further treatments to stay alive and does not want to wait to
Move through this set of information in this order. This will give your introduction the appropriate set-up and flow.
They decide to have Alice undergo genetic testing, which if positive, would support the clinical diagnosis, but if negative, would not necessarily rule it out. When genetic testing confirms her diagnosis, Alice and John must now come to terms with her disease, what this will mean to them as a couple and individually, and the implications
A. Topic Sentence (Introduce R1; use transitions) In the beginning Salva had already lost his
The doctors clear the family to take Lia home and be with her during her last days. Although Lia’s family devoted themselves to making Lia as comfortable as possible, and keeping her alive for decades longer than the doctors expected, her parents blame Lia's doctors for their daughter's prognosis.
If Anna cannot save Kate, I do not think she will face lifelong psychological damage because Anna did everything in her power
Establish the background context - LOOK AT THE HISTORICAL CONTEXT OF YOUR ESSAY PACKET-APPROX 2 SENTENCES
The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks Henrietta Lacks was a woman who found out she had cancer. She went to John Hopkins Hospital where they cut out her cells to examine them and her cells did something weird. Henrietta’s cells were able to reproduce so the hospital sold them in order to help with science. No one knew the real donor of the cells since they went by the name HeLa which is the first letters of her first and last name.
A full and complete paragraph consists of a MINIMUM of 8-10 sentences and follows a
Intro paragraph (hook/grabber, background info to provide context and three part thesis). Remember to indent.
in a clear way. In the expression the storm of grief, Kate tells readers that the emotional trauma Mrs
Maddy discovers that she was never actually sick, and that her mother was suffering from PTSD (Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder). She had lost her husband and son tragically in a car accident, and feared losing her daughter as well. She convinced herself that Maddy had a disease, even though she never found proof. This shows the theme because if Maddy never left her home, she would’ve never known that she wasn’t actually sick. Maddy would have lived out the rest of her life without knowing how remarkable life could
Leukemia is a type of cancer that sadly causes around 25,000 deaths in the U.S. each year. The area that it affects is the blood and the bone marrow and like most or all of the types of cancer in the world if not taken control of early it will most likely kill you.
Thesis/argument statement OR main idea statement: Cancer affects children and their families in many ways.
Jack woke up one morning not feeling well. He felt very weak and could not get out of bed. His mother decided to take him to the doctors. The doctors took many tests to figure out what was making him feel that way. After about an hour or two the doctors got the results back from a blood test. Results that would change Jack’s childhood for the worse. Jack has been diagnosed with Leukemia, a blood cancer. Of course, Jack was not sure what that meant but, his parents became worried beyond belief with the long road ahead of them. Scientists and researchers were all involved in the discovery of Leukemia cancer, which increased knowledge of this cancer, decreased deaths and discovered treatments, and started charity groups to fund research.
The useable organs in her body are donated to Kate so she can live. In the movie Kate says to Anna that is okay if she doesn't want to donate her kidney because Kate didn't want to live anymore, she wanted to die. Anna sued her parents for the right to her own body, for Kate and for herself. She eventually won the case and didn't have to give Kate the kidney. Kate slowly started to get sicker and eventually died.