Note 1. The Golden Net] In its present form this poem is a fair copy of a rough draft in the Rossetti MS., without title. 12 In the opening couplet Blake returns to his first version in the Ross. MS., there afterwards altered to:
Beneath the whitethorns lovely may
Three Virgins at the break of day.
the initial line of which, perhaps inadvertently omitted, seems necessary to explain the reference to the branches in l. 10. D. G. Rossetti, followed by most editors, begins with a triplet. 3 Alas woe] Alas for woe! alas for woe! alas for woe! Ross. MS. 6, 24 iron wire] sweet desire Ross. MS. 1st rdg. del. 7 tears and sighs] sighs and tears Ross. MS. 1st rdg. del. 11 Followed in the Ross. MS. by the deleted passage:
Wings they had that soft enclose
Round their body when they chose,
They would let them down at will,
Or make translucent
20 on] by Ross. MS. 21 Over] Oer Ross. MS. 23 Burning Fire] flaming fire Ross. MS. 26 When, O when, will Morning rise Ross. MS. 1st rdg. del. [back]